12 things in Mrs S’s / Mr K’s pocket / Sponge Bob Square Pants - Choose an interesting character, who you could use for this piece of writing.
Writing task:
To think of 12 things that are either in Mr S’s or Mr K’s pocket or Sponge Bob Square Pants
Focus: Punctuation and Sentences.
Punctuation Success:
OK: All sentences have capital letters and fullstops. Example: In Sponge Bob’s pockets there was a key.
There was also rubber.
Good: There are a range of other punctuation eg commas, question marks etc Example In Sponge Bob’s pocket there was a telescope. Why? This is so he could see where he was going.
Excellent: I can use semicolons in a list. See example below
Example - 12 things in Sponge Bob Square Pants Pocket.
In Sponge Bob’s pocket you would find: Six crusty old crabby patties, in case he gets lost under the sea; an invite to Patrick Star’s 28th birthday party in case he forgets the address; …….
In Tom´s pocket you would find: A deadly mouse trap,so he can catch Jerry; A bit of smelly cheese, so he can lure Jerry; Some old sticky plasters, incase he hurts himself; A dig knockout hammer, so he can scish stuff; A old rusty fishing rod, so he can catch some fish; A bit of moldy cat food ,incase he gets hungry; A broken umdraler for when he wants to reylax; A old rusty blender, that he tries to put jerry in; A dead moldy fish that he forgot to put away; lots of costumes that he uses to trick jerry; A bat to knockout jerry; his old lesh that he forgot to chuckout; some flowers
that he has to give to his girlfriend ;
