Monday, November 9, 2020

My poem

   On Friday I wrote a poem about a connection to us. I wrote about a Kereru here it is.







  THE KERERU


As it soars through the air as fast as a cheetah the Kereru flys. 

White and green glittering blue eyes.as the kereru lands it spots a slimy worm that just popped out of the black soggy ground then the kereru took one step then another step it got the worm. 

The worm is as slimy as a piece of soap. 

The beak is as orange as a road cone. 

I love kereru. 

By Thomas
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 9, 2020 at 1:57 PM

    Cool poem keep the great work up I love the words It picture it in my mind

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  2. JaydenNovember 9, 2020 at 2:00 PM

    Hey Thomas I think this is really cool and it really paints a good picture in my mind

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  3. AnonymousNovember 9, 2020 at 2:03 PM

    hey thomas i really like you paints keep all the good work up good luck.

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